Concentration Update *Would appreciate some comments*
One nearly completed piece on borderline personality disorder, and an obviously just started work-in-progress of a piece on general anxiety (I'll probably remove the woman's hair, since most of my other drawings lack hair).
I actually really like the inclusion of the hair in the second image because I think it adds a little bit of interest to an image that is overall very dark colored. However I think the positive/negative space in figure two is really great and adds to the feeling of isolation.
I know that you still working in progress but are you going to add the background on the second photo? I can see the lighting from different angle so I think you should do something with the background. Also I do like the hair of the woman's and you should try to fix it just a little bit. Over all is really drawing that you have.
These are incredible pieces, I agree about the woman's hair.
ReplyDeleteI actually really like the inclusion of the hair in the second image because I think it adds a little bit of interest to an image that is overall very dark colored. However I think the positive/negative space in figure two is really great and adds to the feeling of isolation.
ReplyDeleteI know that you still working in progress but are you going to add the background on the second photo? I can see the lighting from different angle so I think you should do something with the background. Also I do like the hair of the woman's and you should try to fix it just a little bit. Over all is really drawing that you have.
ReplyDeleteYes, there will be a background. Thank you for your critique!
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