Wednesday, January 6, 2016

Concentration

Here are two similar pieces I made. What can be improved? Which one do you think is stronger?


8 comments:

  1. The second image is strong, it is more appealing to the eye because of the building in the center.

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  2. The second image, I agree, is stronger, because the first image shows reflections in the water, and that distracts from the focal point of the photo.

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  3. I think that the reason the first image is not as strong is because the lines on the building are not perfectly perpendicular. The small blue lines, especially the one in the middle, should make a 90 degree angle.

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  4. I think that to make the first image stronger, you should make the area of cloud enclosed by the building the center point. It's the part your eye is naturally drawn to but its current placement makes the picture look off.

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  5. I think the second image is stronger. I agree that I think the reflection throws off the focal point

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  6. I really like both of these however I think the second one is stronger because the first one my eye goes to the smaller building that looks like the light is coming from behind it and I don't think you intended that to be your focal point. I actually think the reflections in the water look cool.

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  7. I think the first image is your strongest. The second image's bridge looks my like a border on the picture, while the first image is more distorted

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  8. The first image has more distortion in it, but the second image looks more real.

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