Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Concentration Critique Post 1

Elizabeth Finley

My first works were photos of paint drops being dropped into water and clouding out. They were just plain photos and not very strong on their own. I have shifted my concentration from just emphasis on the paints movements within the water to incorporating the paint color, movement, and emphasis into shapes and patterns.
Below is new work (most is in progress) and some photos I took today. Suggestions are very welcome, thank you.











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  1. UnknownSeptember 22, 2015 at 5:11 PM

    Fantastic! Can you write a bit more about your process for those who may not have seen your work prior.

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2015 at 9:48 PM

      okay, thank you for the feedback!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2015 at 7:45 AM

    I really like your new direction. Your last idea was very cool but it seemed a little challenging. The movement and contrast is really apparent. I'm a real big fan of the triangles as well. Keep doing you, good work!

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2015 at 7:49 AM

      thanks, I am trying to evolve my triangles into being more complex and colorful

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    2. UnknownSeptember 23, 2015 at 9:12 AM

      Grant good comment! Try and be as specific as you can when commenting! You will see the benefits once you post and people comment!

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