Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Breadth Update

After the critiques I was told that I needed a movement and more people in my portfolio. Here are some new images that I hope will be good enough.

Movement


Figure Ground
Unity?


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  1. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2016 at 9:31 AM

    Brighten your second image, it is too dark. The last image is really cool!

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2016 at 7:46 AM

    I like your first image. I would recommend just cleaning it up more in the background where there's a few dents. Your last image is really strong too, and think it would be unity.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2016 at 9:09 AM

    In your first image, I think the first image is not as strong as the other in the series.

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