Thursday, March 31, 2016

Concentration Update

I am trying to make new pieces but I am having a little bit of trouble. I did this picture a little while ago but I forgot to post it. I was told it was not very strong. Do any of you have suggestions for what I should do to make it stronger?

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  1. I feel that this piece does not really belong in your breadth (at least not near the end). Compared to the black and white pieces you have been doing recently this piece is a lot weaker (the b&w ones are awesome btw and should be used closer to the end to show growth).

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