I am showing that people are more then their career, that either their career becomes them, or they have other interests. Trying to incorporate more story to make the principle unity
I feel like the contrast between the career half and the normal half is not strong enough. Also, the half Abby is distracting from the subject of the photo.
I think you need to not have your people so posed. Don't make them look at the camera and just take pictures of them actually in action. If you are going to have them "more than their career," show how they are kind or caring with their family, or if they are in an office maybe they like to express themselves with art or dance. And your models don't literally have to be a football player or doctor, you can control it and pick and choose what you want so they appear the way you want with props.
very interesting....
ReplyDeleteI feel like the contrast between the career half and the normal half is not strong enough. Also, the half Abby is distracting from the subject of the photo.
ReplyDeleteI think you need to not have your people so posed. Don't make them look at the camera and just take pictures of them actually in action. If you are going to have them "more than their career," show how they are kind or caring with their family, or if they are in an office maybe they like to express themselves with art or dance. And your models don't literally have to be a football player or doctor, you can control it and pick and choose what you want so they appear the way you want with props.
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