Here's some new concentration pieces of mine. I've decided in these newer images that I was going to use the same silhouette outline of this girl and use different forms of repetition in my images.
The girl doesn't feel very well integrated into the photos, maybe because of the color differences. In the last one, the hammer is not filled with white and looks more natural because of it, but the rest of her dress isn't, and the idea kind of gets lost.
I think the strongest are the last two on the walls because it looks more integrated into the image. You should find more locations with walls, try brick maybe?
The last two images really remind me of Banksy. For the last image I suggest making the white of her dress more subtle and integrated into the gray of the bricks (like the hammer).
The girl doesn't feel very well integrated into the photos, maybe because of the color differences. In the last one, the hammer is not filled with white and looks more natural because of it, but the rest of her dress isn't, and the idea kind of gets lost.
ReplyDeleteMaybe if you sharpen the edges more around the girl it will look more unified?
ReplyDeleteI think the strongest are the last two on the walls because it looks more integrated into the image. You should find more locations with walls, try brick maybe?
ReplyDeleteThe last two images really remind me of Banksy. For the last image I suggest making the white of her dress more subtle and integrated into the gray of the bricks (like the hammer).
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