Friday, October 16, 2015

Concentration Update

This is one of the images I might use for my concentration. Please give feedback on how I can improve it. My principle is analogous colors.

8 comments:

  1. I like this better then the first one; however, I feel like the fourth person should still blend more. Maybe try changing the opacity of the fourth person.

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  2. I like this a lot more than the first one. Maybe try to make the people blend together a little more to help with the flow

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  3. This is better than the one before since there is a lot more going on in the picture. The fourth person in the image lacks the details that the other three have.

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  4. I like it a lot, the use of pattern better than the last one.

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  5. I like it a lot, the use of pattern better than the last one.

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  6. There is not much to improve on this, everything is very well unified. Well done.

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  7. I like the techniques used, but it's a bit busy for my taste. There's a lot going on and I'm not sure what is being depicted. Maybe stick with these techniques and use of colors with simpler subjects?

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