I was thinking of doing a more emotional concentration. I would have deep conditions... such as depression, anger management etc... Is this a better idea?
I also like the way you manipulated the paper split in half, but I also thing that you should make it look like when the two pieces are put together, they make the one picture. The two pieces should aline with one another.
I like your idea, but think you need to make the emotions stronger, and make the emotion clearer. Right now its kind of hard to tell what emotion you're going for especially with the second image.
The picture of Liz I think is the perfect way to keep developing. It's apparent what point you're trying to get across. The picture of Sammy was good, but I feel like the expression on her face didn't quite match the emotion you were going for. I think she should have been more angry and make her her seem like "she's on flames."
I like this idea of portraying deep emotion in your photos. I also like how you used color in the first photo to emphasize the flame, and the anger. I think it would be great if you used color in each photo to highlight the emotion. For the second photos, maybe you could color the mirrors, as that is the main focus of the photo.
I really like the picture of Liz with the way you manipulated the glass and have it split in half.
ReplyDeleteI also like the way you manipulated the paper split in half, but I also thing that you should make it look like when the two pieces are put together, they make the one picture. The two pieces should aline with one another.
ReplyDeleteI like your idea, but think you need to make the emotions stronger, and make the emotion clearer. Right now its kind of hard to tell what emotion you're going for especially with the second image.
ReplyDeleteThe picture of Liz I think is the perfect way to keep developing. It's apparent what point you're trying to get across. The picture of Sammy was good, but I feel like the expression on her face didn't quite match the emotion you were going for. I think she should have been more angry and make her her seem like "she's on flames."
ReplyDeleteI like this idea of portraying deep emotion in your photos. I also like how you used color in the first photo to emphasize the flame, and the anger. I think it would be great if you used color in each photo to highlight the emotion. For the second photos, maybe you could color the mirrors, as that is the main focus of the photo.
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