Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Concentration Update Riley



These images are from my most recent shoot with Jesse.  Like with Abby I shot in the closet and that is giving me the light that I desired. I really am still missing personality in photos so if anyone has any ideas I would appreciate it. I think I am going to try to work with powder and water but I need to take the lights home in order to do that.
 

8 comments:

  1. I think you really hit the mark with getting the lighting exactly the way you wanted. I think you could try having your subjects change their facial expression and show an emotion.

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  2. Lighting is done very well. I think your photo feels too staged, try to make the shots feel more candid and natural.

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  3. Since the lighting is so dark maybe you could try having your subjects make more exaggerated facial expressions so that you can see them more. You lighting looks really good!

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  4. I see such improvement throughout your photos! I personally think that the first one is more catching to the eye. A suggestion is maybe using more than one person in the photo.

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  5. I really like the first one of Jesse. The outline of him is perfect. My only problem with the second one is that half of his face is dark

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  6. I really like the first one of Jesse. The outline of him is perfect. My only problem with the second one is that half of his face is dark

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  8. I really like the first one of Jesse. The outline of him is perfect. My only problem with the second one is that half of his face is dark

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