Wednesday, March 9, 2016

concentration update


Here are two of my newest concentration pieces.



5 comments:

  1. I really like the first photo, but the other photo is look really week and it didn't fit with the background. You should make he show more in the photo.

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  2. I like the first photo, it feels a lot stronger the way the person is with and without the landscape, and doesn't take away from the landscape or person. however the straight edges + white space create a very awkward look, as if it's two separate images. I think the second is weaker, as both the person and the landscape cancel each other out and look cluttered.

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  3. I think you are doing really well. I think that you should try to bring out a little more of Kara's features in the bottom photo.

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  4. I like the first picture but you should spread the background out

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  5. I like how you implemented the diptych style in the first photo. It makes me think of unity kind of putting a story on the subject expressing how she is at peace when she goes out into the mountains. Good job!

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