Concentration Update

I am trying to make new pieces but I am having a little bit of trouble. I did this picture a little while ago but I forgot to post it. I was told it was not very strong. Do any of you have suggestions for what I should do to make it stronger?

Concentration

I re-created my fifth image in my concentration.

Original

New

Breadth

During the critique I was told that my movement was not very strong. This is my new piece, thoughts?

New Concentration - Riley Hughes

Breadth

Possible breadth pieces?  What principles would they be?  Comment any suggestions, if they aren't strong enough just say so. 

Concentration Update

This is my newest concentration piece.  It is edited and done.

This is from the same shoot, but I'm not sure what to do with it.  I might add it to breadth for positive/negative space.

Concentration

I'm kind of taking my concentration in a new direction and focusing on dancing more. Let me know what you think.

Concentration - Riley Hughes

Breadth Update - Riley Hughes

Concentration Update

Any suggestions?

Concentration update

Let me know what you think

Alex Jones Concentration Update

Breadth Update

Cool Colors

Figure Ground?

Texture?

Update

                                                                 Finished Breadth Pieces.      

   

                                                                             Radial

Positive/Negative Space

In progress concentration piece. 

Concentration update

This is my newest concentration piece. Let me know what you think

Breadth

Asymmetrical Balance or Positive/Negative

Thoughts?

Concentration update

This is a piece for tourettes syndrome, a neural condition that causes uncontrollable actions to occur. It has different effects, the most common one being the shouting of random words (usually profanity). Basically, people know what their body does and the bad effects their actions could have, but they're unable to control their body.
Also, it's another fun condition that runs in my dad's side of the family. My dad suffers from unpreventable twitching and randomly forcing his eyes closed, while I'm stuck with random bouts of shaking and the occasional twitch.

Breadth Images

Monochromatic

Perspective

Movement

Thoughts?

Breadth

Progressive Rhythm 

Variety 

Breadth Update

These are some of the pictures I took at El Dorado Canyon as well as the strip, but I'm having trouble captioning the ones from El Dorado and choosing between my Positive/Negative Space Pictures. I would appreciate all opinions even if they aren't strong enough

Positive/Negative Space 1

Positive/Negative Space2?

Asymmetrical Balance

Unity???

Analogous Colors

Flowing Rhythm