Final Concentration Pieces

Here are two final pieces I included in my concentration.

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Here are a couple of my final photos. 

Concentration Update

New concentration piece.  I shot with flour and then used brushes in photoshop to make more "smoke," then added color.

Concentration Update

This is my finished canvas print.  I have three pieces left for concentration and I think I have plans for they will be, but if anyone has any suggestions that would be greatly appreciated.  I have decided that my concept is personal enlightenment through internal reconstruction.  My portfolio shows the "phases" the subject goes through to find herself.  Each image has a phase of insight where the break down and resolve occurs.  This one be where she is breaking under pressure.  If anyone would like me to explain the others let me know. 

Concentration

I am thinking about using this image as my final Concentration piece. Do you have any suggestions/what do you think?

Concentration Update

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These are my newest concentration pieces. I am working more with letting go of the fear for my last three images. 

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I need to choose one image from each shoot. The first three: I am trying to show the separation of lives (work and home). 

In the next two images I am trying to show the giving up one part of life as the art/work/sport takes over the rest of his life.

In the final images I am showing multiple stages in the process of either attempting to balance the two lives or leaving one behind. I do not know which I like best. 

Please help me choose one!

Another Update

I also made this concentration piece. What do you think?

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The artist has the idea in her mind before actually achieving it. and then as the portfolio progresses the artist becomes their work instead of having it disconnected. 

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I needed an image to bridge between colored portraits to more graphic images. What do you think?

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new concentration

Concentration Update

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I have been trying to come up with new ideas for my concentration. Recently I have made a new image and I want to know how you all thought about it?

Riley Breadth

New Concentration

Very tentative concentration piece

Here is a tentative concentration piece I have been playing around with. Thoughts? Suggestions? Thank you

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I'm not sure if I like this idea or not. I think I could have executed it better. Any thoughts?

My concept is strength in femininity.  These two images were ruled out in the beginning but I think they could really work with my new theme.

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I have been working and this is what I have come up with. Thoughts?

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I am showing that people are more then their career, that either their career becomes them, or they have other interests. Trying to incorporate more story to make the principle unity

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I am trying to make new pieces but I am having a little bit of trouble. I did this picture a little while ago but I forgot to post it. I was told it was not very strong. Do any of you have suggestions for what I should do to make it stronger?

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I re-created my fifth image in my concentration.

Original

New

Breadth

During the critique I was told that my movement was not very strong. This is my new piece, thoughts?

New Concentration - Riley Hughes